א ליד פון עמילי דיקינסאן

Lovely effort for a difficult poem. I know non-chassidic Yiddish speakers make different word choices, but I'm pretty sure chassidic speakers would use
דערנאך
as opposed to
דעמאלט
in this context. For the benefit of those interested, I'm pasting the original poem. I hope that's O.K. with you, Sholem

The Heart asks Pleasure -- first

The heart asks pleasure - first
And then, excuse from pain-
And then, those little anodynes
That deaden suffering;

And then, to go to sleep;
And then, if it should be
The will of its Inquisitor,
The liberty to die.